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Machine translation: why you shouldn't make it too easy for the program

7/16/2018

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3: Chopping up snakes 

One of the tenets that most proponents of an easily comprehensible style of writing seem to agree on is that

     sentences should not be too long.

The Plain English Campaign, for example, recommends that clear writing should have an average sentence length of 15 to 20 words. Complex sentences can cause havoc because the structure and meaning may not be clear.

​Let’s put a machine to the test. The following German example (in box on right) contains four short sentences.

As you can see, Google Translate is quite capable of delivering a correct English version that makes perfect sense.

​What happens if we turn three of those sentences into one long ‘snake’ of a sentence? Let’s add some conjunctions:

       …eine einfache Deinstallation, denn die Macher…, sondern bauen eher darauf…

Again, the result is satisfying:

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​Note how the program even offers a bit of stylistic variation by differentiating between “are likely to believe” and “rely on”.

This result doesn’t really surprise, given that machine translation tools are being developed with ever greater computing power “brains” and learning mechanisms modelled on human neural networks. Services such as Amazon Translate are cheap to use and capable of handling large batches at high speed. Cryptic product descriptions such as the following will soon be a thing of the past:​
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How about fiction? Let’s put another free tool to the test:
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This isn’t such a long sentence – and you could find longer ones, containing several subordinate clauses, in some kinds of fiction or philosophical texts, for example –, but let’s not dwell on that. What we can see is that syntactic complexity is handled quite well.

So why do blunders and howlers still occur? Any idea? And why is the following sentence (from the AWS website) not perfect? (Clue: it has to do with the translation of ‘simply’.)
      
Wenn Ihr kostenloser Nutzungszeitraum abgelaufen ist oder Ihre Nutzung das Kontingent übersteigt, zahlen Sie einfach die üblichen     nutzungsbasierten Preise.


Send me your answers and let’s start the discussion. Alternatively, come back in a few weeks’ time when we’ll take the topic further to talk about nominalizations, semantics (vocabulary) and the role of punctuation in machine translation. And on how to avoid losing vital bits of information. See you then!

References:
Duden-Ratgeber Technische Dokumentation. Beschreibende und anleitende Texte erstellen. 2012. (von Andreas Schlenkhoff in Zusammenarbeit mit der Duden-Redaktion) ISNB: 978-3-411-74721-4
Martin Cutts. 1996. The Plain English Guide. How to write clearly and communicate better. ISNB: 0-19-860049-6
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vidmate.onl link
6/10/2024 11:59:09 am

I wanted to express my gratitude for your insightful and engaging article. Your writing is clear and easy to follow, and I appreciated the way you presented your ideas in a thoughtful and organized manner. Your analysis was both thought-provoking and well-researched, and I enjoyed the real-life examples you used to illustrate your points. Your article has provided me with a fresh perspective on the subject matter and has inspired me to think more deeply about this topic.

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